Ultimate Character Story pg1

My "ULTIMATE CHARACTER STORY" (UCS) I had previously just written including most of my characters all together... but was forced by my best friend to make it into a comic... it is coming along slowly >__>
Full view to actually read what they're saying, or download.
This page shows Mira, (my)Draco and Mars.
"Bracken" is a school I'd created in a story for naughty kids when I was younger, so I reused that but for different kinds of students
P.S sorry it's wonky.. my camera defied me yet again @_@
PPS The first word I write down.. and I spell it wrong DX damn you bad spelling. I mean ultimate instead of ultamate.

characters and story belonging to meeee